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Work experience:
1) Connected to equipment:
Basic equipment is Lucent 5ESS Switch with different application: Local, Toll, Gateway, Operator, Mobile, CI, NFM.
Furthermore Lucent CDMA lineage – Flexent ECP and Flexent BS.
Some operation of Siemens EWSD and NetManager.
Ancient Alcatel MT-20/25 system as well was operated.
2) Connected to specialty:
Basic function is customer technical support (mostly – of Lucent product: 5ESS and Flexent systems), including software upgrades;
as well some installation (under supervision), testing and acceptance.
Corporative web-site maintenance.

Qualities:
responsibility;
goodwill;
support;
propriety;
friendliness;
team spirit;
activity;

No qualities:
insincerity;
laziness;
falsehood;
roughness;

Expect:
financial and moral reward;
proper work conditions as well as equipment, documentation, instructions, procedures, education, etc;
raising and arrangement my exact tasks and responsibilities as well company structure;
guarantee for work in long future prospects;
appreciation of my professional qualities;
balance of liberality and responsibility;
consideration of my personal features;

What to do:
to learn my job: equipment, procedures, rules, standards, culture/values, etc;
to perform my role/functions in-full and in-time;
to become a member of the team and create good relationships with colleagues;
to improve my professional knowledge – education and self-learning;
to develop myself as a specialist/expert;